We have to write a sonnet for English class, don't make fun of what I have I just wrote this and I'm no poet! Ha ha. But the lines I have dashes by either don't have the right number of syllables or I just don't think they fit right in the poem. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! Even if it doesn't deal with the lines I need to change..thanks!
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