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Could you help me correct my English grammar? Besides, is this passage clear?
Then I conducted an optic experiment with the optic engineers to study the influence of the gap between original design and the real part. Based on my 3D models, we engaged the ray tracings and spectrums for both original design and real part by simulating experiment. The results of the ray tracings showed that the beam was very slightly shifted inwards with the series lead, and the luminance of the knob center was very slightly higher in the case of original design than that of real part. Considering the cost of tooling modification or fabrication a new tool, and the schedule of project, I assessed the potential risks and decided to accept the present status of this light guide. I undertook the tolerance analysis of the current situation of the part with Enventive (tolerance analysis software), drafted a new 2D standard drawing. In the meantime, I issued the PCR (Product/Process change request and notice) to all related departments, and signed for the initial sample of the supplier.
You did a really good job. Here is how i would write it to make the passage easier to read.
I conducted an experiment with the optic engineers to study the influence of the gap between the original design and the real part. Based on my 3D models, we engaged the ray tracings and spectrums for both the original design and the real part by simulating the experiment. The results of the ray tracings showed that the beam was slightly shifted inwards with the series lead and the luminance of the knob center was slightly higher in the case of the original design then in that of the real part. Considering the cost of tooling modifications, the fabrication of a new tool, and the schedule of the project, I assessed the potential risks and decided to accept the present status of this light guide. I undertook the tolerance analysis of the current situation of the part with Enventive, a type of tolerance analysis software, and drafted a new 2D standard for drawing. In the meantime, I issued PCR, also known as Product/Process change request and notice, to all related departments and signed for the initial sample of the supplier.
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